Make the term shorter or change the term used
at least 11 suspected drug lords were among over 2,000 self confessed drug users and users who surrendered to ozamiz city mayor reynaldo parojinogSr. yesterday.
the drug traffickes were from barangays tinago, carmen annex, san roque, sta. cruz and triempo.
parajinog had threatened to name the drug lords in public if they would not surrender and cooperate with authorities.
the suspects, who converged at the ramiro city gymnasium, vowed to stop their illegal activities.
can you please paraphrasing this?
Remove AT LEAST. A news should be accurate. Change yesterday. You should put the exact date. Change the passive verbs into active.