I’m sorry, but we cannot grant your request. It’s just happened that the one who deposit that payment has official business and there was Metro bank along her way. Much better if you pick up the check and provide as our official receipt. WHATS WRONG WITH THIS SENTENCE? WHAT PUNCTUATION BETWEEN CLAUSE IN THIS SENTENCE IS WRONG?

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2014-10-13T19:18:18+08:00
I'm sorry,but we cannot grant your request.It just happened that the person who deposited the payment had an official and there was metro bank along her way.It's better if you personally pick the check up and provide it as our official receipt.
(BUT I'M NOT SURE WITH THIS) 
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